the only critique i could think to give is maybe work on tapering your hatch lines on the shorts so they blend into the blacks a little more. and maybe toss a white highlight where the bottom of the crotch overlaps her left (on our right) leg... in the pencils you can see the line even though he shaded it all out. BUT the differences in line weights and the sharpness of the hair and eyes are truely amazing. this is a great piece.
Peace.